Monday 27 December 2021

Haiku Poetry

 


My family dog Milo he is 1 year and 4 Months he is a Border Collie.



2 comments:

  1. Ata mārie Amelia!


    I’ve just returned from a break, great to see you still getting involved in the Summer Learning Journey! Love your poem, have you tried doing one in the traditional Japanese Haiku structure? The original way a Haiku is made is with:

    Five syllables on the first line
    Seven syllables on the second lane
    And then five syllables on the last line

    It’s great that you’ve been able to spend time with your family, including Milo, over Xmas. Milo looks super friendly; did you get to name them?

    Can’t wait to see what you post next!


    Ngā mihi,
    Chris

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    1. Hi Chris yes the family name the dog as a family.

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